Common Measure - Breaking up in public 💔
A Public SceneI saw two sitting on a bench. She looked a touch disconsolate. I wondered what he’d said to her To parent her inchoate tear. Or was it like a comforter— His presence (though he didn’t throw His arm around, how could I know He didn’t heal, by being near, The hurt an absent criminal Dispensed.) But either way while those Two figures stayed, no end was fixed; The tear could yet still be revoked— I saw it linger on the lid Unsure if it should drop or dry. Vocab“Inchoate”: nascent; just coming into being ExplanationFirst stanza The speaker of the poem sees two people sitting together on a bench. We see, through the eyes of the speaker, a tear forming in the woman’s eye. The speaker wonders what the man has said to the woman to make her upset. Second stanza Then the speaker changes their mind: perhaps the man is comforting the woman. It doesn’t look like it, necessarily: they are not touching as they sit together. However, perhaps his mere proximity is a comforting, healing presence. Third stanza The speaker finishes his thought from stanza 2: perhaps the person who caused the woman to cry is not in the scene. The poem works with unknowns and ambiguity. The speaker stops trying to guess who made the woman cry, and moves on to a possible resolution to the woman’s sadness. “The tear could yet still be revoked,” i.e. the hurt could be undone as long as the two figures remained there, speaking, whether the damage had been done by one of them or not. Only if the two parted would a rehabilitation become impossible. Fourth stanza In this two-line coda, our view hyperzooms in to see the tear “linger on the lid / Unsure if it should drop or dry.” The cropped image is a microcosm for the poem itself, unsure of its own outcome. Lesson(s)
Poem stats; scansion14 lines Iambic tetrameter “Rhyme scheme” (there are certainly end rhymes in the poem, but to say it has a “rhyme scheme” is a bit of a stretch. Anyways, if only to amuse you, here is how I scan it): ABCD CEED FGHG HI If you liked this post from Common Measure, why not share it? You can follow me Instagram, Twitter, LinkedIn, and friend me on Facebook. |
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