Lit Hub's The Craft of Writing: Laura van den Berg

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THE CRAFT OF WRITING

Laura van den Berg on the possibilities of setting.

July 28, 2021

In Florida, the landscape is omnipresent, from the soaking heat of summer to the bluster of afternoon storms to the lizards that find their way inside, appear on counters, tabletops, walls. Perhaps this accounts for why I have to know where a story is set before I can begin. I need a sharp sense of the landscape before I can think about character or event.

The novelist Anne Enright has a quote that I return to often: “All description is an opinion about the world. Find a place to stand.” Descriptive writing of place should offer more than literal details — it should establish a sense of perspective. Place is not just a practical or logistical consideration; it can be a powerful generator of tone and atmosphere. It can help dictate what is possible in a fictional world and what is not. 

Read more on developing a setting:

Brett Biebel

on avoiding geographic clichés. 

Rebecca Priestley

on experiencing a landscape in order to write it.

Ben Weissenbach  
on thinking about the meaning of place.

Amanda Page
on telling the story of the American Midwest.

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Once I know where a story is located, I can start thinking about how specified the setting will be. In some cases, I prefer to leave places unnamed. My story “Friends,” for example, is set in Cambridge, Massachusetts — a place I know well — but in the story, the city remains unnamed. This ambiguity helps to give the impression of a world where leaps into the surreal are readily available.

Another story, “Slumberland,” is clearly pinned in Central Florida, but the exact area is left ambiguous. In my imagination, the story is set in my sister’s neighborhood, but I wanted to give myself some leeway with the logistics — the latitude to move a particular house from one side of town to the other, for example. Tone was a consideration, too, as I wanted the story to feel both of the familiar world and not. With other stories, the opposite is true: place needs to be named, known, clear. “Karolina” is set in Mexico City in the aftermath of the 2017 earthquake, and it felt important to render the verisimilitude of that particular moment — as I experienced it — as faithfully as I could. 

3 Books with Inventive Approaches to Setting

RECOMMENDED BY LAURA VAN DEN BERG 

Elias Rodriques, All the Water I've Seen Is Running 

 Katie Kitamura, A Separation

Rachel Kushner, The Flamethrowers

This can make for an interesting writing exercise, these gradations of specificity. To explore this idea further, consider revisiting a preexisting draft and altering the story’s relationship to setting. For example, if the setting is exact, make the place partially ambiguous (i.e. the general area is specific, but the exact coordinates are withheld) or largely ambiguous (i.e. a place that could be any number of places). If your setting is already partially or largely ambiguous, consider experimenting in the opposite direction and make the setting highly particular (i.e. neighborhoods and streets are named). Notice what changes as you play with these different approaches. How does the story’s aura shift? What begins to feel possible or not? How does the representation of setting alter the fictional world?

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