11 examples from inside Copywriting Course

In the members’ area, we help people with their copywriting.

Instead of telling you all about that stuff, I figured it’d be better to SHOW you what we do.

We’ll give you specific feedback, explain what’s wrong...AND fix it.

We’ll do this for...

ABOUT PAGES

We fix several About Pages every week in the forum and Office Hours. It's so much easier to have a professional spot (and make) changes.

HOME PAGES

This re-do is from a lesson on cleaning up Home Page hero sections. A few changes later on the site and conversions were up.

SLIDESHOWS

We rewrote this member’s slideshow, which he’ll use in emails and on his website. This single slideshow has created content for his website, sales page, videos, and social media posts.

ADS

We showed one member how to improve his Facebook Ad with a visual example. Often times it's just easier for us to SHOW changes than describe changes.

BLOG POSTS

We edit + redo entire blog posts. If you have a hunch your blog posts isn't the best in the world on a topic, we can help.

EMAILS

Here’s a rewrite of a member’s welcome email section. This email goes to every new signup, and now converts much higher.

LANDING PAGES

This is a real example of feedback we gave to one member in the forum.

PRODUCT PAGES

This is a real example of feedback we gave to one member in the forum. She'll makes a few changes, then we can help modify even more, which ends up making the pages "tight" as possible.

LOCAL GOOGLE BUSINESS PROFILES

This is a real example of feedback we gave to improve one member’s Google My Business listing. Small changes on these dramatically increase visibility (and trust) to local businesses.

IMAGES

This is a real example of an image we redid for a member’s email sales campaign, making it simpler and easier to understand.


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