Erwan Derlyn - A pitch that is music to the ears
What if a hitmaker like Max Martin produced your next pitch deck? That’s an odd question I started asking myself after watching the Netflix documentary This is Pop: Stockholm Syndrome and this interview at the Polar Music Prize 2016. Let me add some context. According to metrics from DocSend, VCs spend on average less than 3 minutes to review pitch decks, a figure consistently decreasing since 2018. That’s roughly the duration of a song. And when it comes to hitmaking, the Swedish producer might have the formula. Since 1998, Max Martin has written or co-written 25 Billboard Hot 100 number-one hit songs. He is the songwriter with the third-most number-one singles on the charts, behind only Paul McCartney and John Lennon. Here are some of his biggest hits to refresh your memory.
Even though songs and pitch decks seem diametrically opposed, I believe that there are techniques that startup founders can borrow to catch investors’ attention. Let’s explore some of them. Aim for memorability
The same applies to your pitch; first impressions matter. Your goal isn’t to get an instant term sheet but trigger the interest for more views. DocSend data confirms that investors spend more time on subsequent visits to decks they end up funding. Narrative hook
Most songwriters start with the lyrics. But Max Martin usually begins with the melody instead, where vocals are meant to serve the melody. Thus, the hook acts as an anchor to intrigue listeners early in the song. In a pitch, the hook is your story. People remember stories better than facts alone; it’s called the narrative effect. So don’t start designing your slides before you have absolute clarity on your story. If you feel stuck, Lenny Rachitsky shares an excellent framework in this post. He recommends articulating any story around this structure:
Get to the chorusIn most of Max Martin's hits, the chorus hits before you’re 50 seconds into the song. In a pitch, the chorus is your product. Data collected by DocSend validate that companies that successfully raised from investors tend to highlight their product near the beginning of their deck. Create a sense of familiarity
What Max Martin describes is called the familiarity bias in psychology; people have an innate desire for things they're already familiar with. And there are several ways to include familiarity in your pitch deck:
Using these common patterns will facilitate understanding your business for investors and save them some precious effort to retain critical information. Less is more
He describes yet another psychological principle: cognitive load. Cognitive load is the amount of working memory resources required by someone to process information. Whether it’s a song or a presentation, a common pitfall is to overdo. That’s why many producers often describe themselves as reducers. In this guide, the team at Y Combinator shares 3 rules for clarity in pitch decks:
For inspiration, this Crunchbase article is full of good (and bad) examples. Live experimentThis one is not directly connected to Max Martin but his mentor Denniz Pop. In 1992, he discovered a young band: Ace of Base. One of their members recalls the process behind launching their breakout song.
No, I’m not recommending you to hit the club with your pitch deck, lol. But there are several ways you could test what resonates or not in your pitch:
With millions on the line, it could be worth the extra effort. TakeawaysHitmakers like Max Martin use proven storytelling tools and psychological principles to capture attention and keep listeners engaged. These techniques apply to designing pitch decks too and, generally speaking, to any form of communication, whether you’re working on a presentation, a landing page, or ad copy for your startup. While there’s an unlimited supply of pitch deck templates available online, these are not the best starting point. Instead, spend more time on crafting a compelling and memorable story to introduce your product and strive for clarity by removing any elements that don’t contribute to the latter. And obviously, test and practice! I think Max Martin would agree that there is no golden rule or magical hack. A great song won't make an average singer sound like Adele. And a great pitch deck won't turn a mediocre product into a unicorn. If you’re in the process of raising capital, good luck! I hope this article was valuable. If you need feedback on your pitch deck or strategy, don’t hesitate to reach out 👋 See you next time for an article about international expansion. If you liked this post from Erwan Derlyn, why not share it? |
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